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| hotlipedjen |
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16 Jul 2006 |
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Very good! Am looking forward to reading the sequels.
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| Verda |
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16 Jul 2006 |
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About time Harris got that right between the eyes. Excellent way to end this part of the story. Will read the sequel as soon as I can. It's been fun, thanks for the ride.
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| Verda |
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16 Jul 2006 |
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They took them down and Buffy didn't even break a nail thanks to her new beau. Now to have fun. Almost done. Thanks for the great chappie.
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| Verda |
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16 Jul 2006 |
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He looks gorgeous and it's his first date. Hope Xander doesn't try and ruin it for everyone. Great chapter.
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| Verda |
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16 Jul 2006 |
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At least he now has hope. Love that she's actually being civil to him. Great chapter. Thanks.
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| Verda |
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16 Jul 2006 |
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Trying to back peddle now isn't going to work, she already know's most of your secrets. Love now wonderful Tara is to him. Great chapter.
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| Verda |
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16 Jul 2006 |
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After all that I can't believe she's pissed at him for giving her a kiss on the forehead. Has she learned nothing? And just when Spike was ready for retribution, he's gotta give himself an ass beating. Maybe there's hope for Xander yet. thanks for the great read.
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| Verda |
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16 Jul 2006 |
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Spike's got a cell? Anya's not home and Xander is missing too? = Vegas Wedding! He said he was going to marry her. Most of that worrying for nothing. Glad Buffy's still tuned in, but how long does the spell last? As much as I want for Dawn not to worry I want for Buffy to understand more. Great chapter. Thanks for the read.
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| Verda |
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16 Jul 2006 |
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Dawn's starting to act grown up, making decisions that are her's alone to make concerning Buffy. Nice to see. Great dialogue for Spike when he's talking to himself. Really like this story. thanks for the read.
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| Verda |
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15 Jul 2006 |
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Very good explanation of why he had the eggs. So glad she's seeing everything for herself. She definately needs to, also happy that Dawn is sticking up for Spike. Very interesting story. Thanks for the read.
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| Verda |
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15 Jul 2006 |
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Yay Dawn! way to go in a crisis! Liked how you interpreted Spike's wish. Just wondering why you changed the Glory sequence, when everything else was by the scripted? Glad that you had her feel his pain, even if nothing else happens at least she will know thw magnitude of this love. Great chapter. Thanks for the read.
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| Verda |
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15 Jul 2006 |
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Love the incantation and the results. Just wonder whats happening to Buffy now. Very interesting story. Like it alot. thanks for the read.
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| Verda |
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15 Jul 2006 |
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Never liked the the way Xander treated Ahn. He should be jealous, she was to good for him. Don't have much sympathy for Buffy either during this period of time. Very good chapter. Thanks for the read.
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| Verda |
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15 Jul 2006 |
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The was a very poignant epi during the series. They were both in so much pain, solace is something they needed. Very good chapter. Thanks for the read.
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| Verda |
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15 Jul 2006 |
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Always hated that she even gave Xander's suggestion a brief moment of thought. You got to know how desperate he was to think about doing a spell. Poor Spike. Like where this is going. Thanks for the read.
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| NicCuinn |
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10 Jul 2006 |
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Aww - I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this! Very sweet, and I like the way things worked out! I am a sucker for a fluffy ending, over an angsty one :)
Well done, and thanks for writing it!
~Nic
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| Joyce |
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26 Jun 2006 |
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I've never ever read a fanfic that addressed Xander's culpability like the one Buffy gave. Bravo! Great tale.
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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AHHHHH I loved it - way to tell Xander off! Such a great story! I enjoyed it immensely even if I have read it before (a while ago). I can't wait to reread the next story! (Probably in the next few days) thanks for the fab storytelling!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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*grin* I love Anya! You have written her beutifully in this story! I enjoyed taking care of the nerd herd - hopefully this will prevent the incident with Warren shooting Tara. I love this story!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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AHHHH what a sweet chapter, with the flowers and the almost blushing Spike. I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to see what Xander's reaction will be to Spike being there!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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Oh it did work (lucky spike!) I liked this chapter a lot!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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Giggles - if only it was that easy to be able to say undo it it would be done. LOL I like the realizations he had and his backpeddling of thoughts. I enjoyed tara's supporting nature as well. Great chapter!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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*grin* I really like this chapter - I love the telling off of Willow - she deserved it so much; I enjoyed spike's realiziation of he might be responsobile and xander's thought and dears about demons
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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I loved this update - the whole part about Spike having a cell phone and not giving it to the Scoobies is priceless. Willow, again, is not in my opinion using her intellegence. How is it that the only people to truly see Spike is Dawn. Very realistic however and true to character. I love your characterizations and the way this story plays out!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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I am really enjoying this - I love responsible dawn and all of spike's memories/thoughts. I hope that Buffy realizes what he feels is love and soon! Great chapter I am enjoying it very much!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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I don't really like Willow's attitude in this chapter - she seems more judgmental and willing to jump to conclusions. tara at least seems to be more level headed about everything. Great chapter!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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What an excellant intrepretation of his wish! I love the hitchhiking through his body and truly seeing how he feels, through his expeierences because otherwise she is blinded by her past and her fears. great story and I am really enjoying this!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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I love how Spike's first "will" spell affected Buffy. She knew exactly what she wanted at the moment. A drink. I love the second spell even more. Having her confide in Dawn was an excellant move. I enjoyed how spike is so responisble and intellegent when it comes to magic. He did restore Dru and he didnt survive for a century by being stupid - he may be impulsive but he is not stupid! *hugs* thanks for the great chappie!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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Another excellant chapter. In this chapter I enjoyed the discussion between Xander and Buffy. Xander's about face may have been a result of a wish, but was wonderful and quite grown up to see. I am happy that he wants to make things right with anya and that his true heart is with Anya
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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I enjoyed this chapter immensely - I loved how you spoke about traking opportunities for love and how spike turned away from destuctiveness (drink) to helping anya get through what she is feeling with support and friendship. This was an excellant chapter!
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| Athenewolfe |
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24 Jun 2006 |
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I have read this story before but decided to reread again. This is a very compelling start to a beutiful story. I love how Spike can't believe that Buffy truly doesn't see him. His need for oblivion in this chaper after the revelation is poignant. This is an incredable fic and great beginning!
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| jl1980 |
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23 Jun 2006 |
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excellent story...love how she told xander off...but i have a feeling xander's going to continue to be a butt in the next fic, isn't he? :( well...off to go find out :)
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| jl1980 |
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23 Jun 2006 |
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i love anya...and i love how the gang took out the nerds...and tara's okay!!! yea!! love your alternate ending to that chapter of the show...on to the epilogue :)
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| jl1980 |
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23 Jun 2006 |
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wow...this story is winding up beautifully...very excellent job...i love spike written this way, insecure and sensitive, but still smart-mouth and cocky and oh-so-hot...love it :)
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| jl1980 |
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23 Jun 2006 |
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awww..i like how sweet she's being with him , not completely open yet, but definitely a new attitude :) i like it :)
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| jl1980 |
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22 Jun 2006 |
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the way you've written spike is so sweet and sad...poor baby...i love that tara's there for him, though, the way you described his feelings on their relationship in this chapter was flawless...so very heartbreaking and i hope buffy is good to him after this :)
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| jl1980 |
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22 Jun 2006 |
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i'm glad anya was honest with xander because secrets, even a relatively harmless one like that, are not all that good for relationships...and they're about to figure it out...i hope they all go easy on spike, he didn' mean to :)
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| jl1980 |
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22 Jun 2006 |
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so where is anya? i've got a bad feeling about this...don't blame spike for not wanting buffy to know he's got a cell phone, poor boy...and will and dawnie are looking in the wrong direction sort of ... it's not so much anya's wish granting that's the problem here... :) excellent chapter :)
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| jl1980 |
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22 Jun 2006 |
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where is he going? i feel so bad for him, maybe buffy will understand when she wakes up, though...hope they can find him in time...
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| jl1980 |
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21 Jun 2006 |
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okay...so where *is* xander and anya? getting interesting, but i hope they dont get mad at spike over this...and i guess he closed off the spell but left her linked to his thoughts and feelings...not so much with the good...another great chapter though :)
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| jl1980 |
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21 Jun 2006 |
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that was just heart-breaking...poor spike...i hope she wises up now that she knows what she put him through....an excellent, touching emotional chatper :)
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| jl1980 |
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21 Jun 2006 |
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oh wow...there's always consequences, spike....what has he done? can't wait to read more...love buffy's true confessions though :P hilarious but true :)
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| jl1980 |
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20 Jun 2006 |
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good...at least maybe what he said will make xander chill a little...i'm so glad spike and anya didn't fall into the trap they did on the show...this story is thoroughly engaging..i'm totally hooked by now, loving it :) off to work, read more later ;)
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| jl1980 |
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20 Jun 2006 |
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wow..i really hope they're not doing more than dancing becaue *boy* could that get awkward! lol...very interesting chapter, can't wait to see where you take this :) |
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| jl1980 |
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20 Jun 2006 |
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wow...this could get really interesting...don't really know why i haven't started reading this one before, but i have a feeling i'm going to enjoy it :) |
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| rachel2205 |
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14 Jun 2006 |
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Hi there! Good fic. The characterisations are very good. I like that Buffy expects Spike to change - she would. The way Tara and Willow got back together was nice and understated. Spike's interior monologue read well. Buffy gave Xander a bit of a pasting - you not a fan? ;) Still, he deserves a telling off. |
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| btvsfreak |
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5 Jun 2006 |
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Bloody wonderful! Enjoyed every chapter. |
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| fallen_angel |
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30 Mar 2006 |
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buffy still vacationing in spike land and scoobies still freaking, this is getting good |
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| fallen_angel |
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30 Mar 2006 |
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where are Anya and Xander? luved the egg explanation
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| fallen_angel |
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30 Mar 2006 |
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ok so the spell didn't go wrong. that's good. poor Dawn she must be freaked. i think spike needs to steal a phone for Dawn's sake |
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| fallen_angel |
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30 Mar 2006 |
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spike's smart then how did the spell go wrong? i better read and find out |
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| fallen_angel |
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30 Mar 2006 |
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about the money comment, is Buffy planning to elpe too? i mean Spike and xander having a double wedding could be interesting |
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| fallen_angel |
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30 Mar 2006 |
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being caught in the Bronze is better that being caught on a table. |
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| fallen_angel |
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30 Mar 2006 |
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so far so good |
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Spike's Will be Done. - Chapter 1 - Cemeteries
jane
I would recommend this story to anyone. This is the first part of a truly fantstic series that just gets better and better. It's pure genius that satisfies on every level. I love it and I defy anyone to read it and not be overwhelmed. This writer is up there with the best. If Scotland could pay footie like this lassie writes they would have won the World Cup long ago.
I came to see this after enigmaticblue recced it on her lj. It's nearly 1.30 am 'cos I've just read "Spike's Will Be Done" straight through. I loved it. Loved the ending. OK, Joss would never have given it to us in a zillion years, but I wish he had. Thanks.
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gillo
Finally found time to go back and start at the beginning! This is a really good AU version - it holds together really well, and Spike's wishes were very him - actually took time to think about it, gave Buffy free will to make her mind up and so on.
Love the idea of Anya being able to sort it so that Warren et al got arrested, and so glad that Buffy told Xander things exactly like they were.
Chapter 3...
Yummy goodness! Love the fact that Xander has to face the consequences
of his actions in leaving Anya at the altar. I really like the way you
are building tension in each chapter... I am so hooked! Must read more!
SUBMITTED BY: selene
Finished chapter one...
I love it. I forgot how awful Buffy treated Spike. You really got into Spike's head perfectly. I am so excited to have "found" this. Great work!!!
SUBMITTED BY: selene
I just finished reading this story and I really enjoyed it!! I loved Spike's choice of wishes. The way you described Buffy inside his dreams was excellent. The ending with Xander being put in his place **cheers** well done!! Thank you for a lovely story... I look forward to reading the sequel/s.
SUBMITTED BY: always_jbj
I just found this story - and man, I was blown
away! It was fabulous! Absolutely wonderful! Keep up the good
work!
This was a great story. Good use of humour, too. (Loved Dawn taking
out Andrew by kicking him in that place where Spike had trained
her to kick any guy who was doing something she didn't like...and
she didn't like the idea of him getting away. I liked the campaign,
too. I'd love to read the sequel, so please keep writing.
SUBMITTED BY: t_geyer (before she started acting as my wonderful
unpaid beta-reader)
...Nice touch giving Xander the orbs. He definitely
deserves them; poor guy. It must be hard for his manly ego to
know that all the women he's surrounded by are more powerful than
he is. He could use a booster.
I also love how you added in small touches from
the show (the orbs, part of the Bronze/nerd scene)... Little things
like that give the reader something to hold onto; gracefully employed.
Do us all a favour and publish more things on
**. I'm sure I'll get bored again soon...
SUBMITTED BY: Sarr Chasm
